Tuesday, 28 September 2010

A Lonely Old Ghoul

There once was a lonely old ghoul,
who was twisted and evil and cruel.
Til a white witch's art,
mended his broken heart,
now he dances and acts like a fool.

3 comments:

Nancy said...

too many words in 4th line.

mended his heart ???

Dickon Springate - Travel Writer said...

No, I prefer it as it is.

nothingbutlimericks said...

There once was a vampy old witch,
The thought of her near made me twitch,
But she had a nice twin,
With a similar grin,
My thought? Which witch was which?

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